None of this stands up to any sort of robust critical thinking, which is sadly lacking in LLMs.
Eg. All your "high performing" worker input relies on skills gained elsewhere , and others have already asserted that the time spent doing one job is not directly equivalent to the time spent doing another job.
All your renewable energy sources rely on external inputs to manufacture or obtain. "We'll just use solar panels and battery storage and avoid all the centralised systems", you fail to understand the enormous resources needed to create such items in bulk, which is what you'll need when making hyper local energy systems.
Essentially, your dream society is leeching off capitalism to exist, and this seems to directly go against its lofty ideals.
Linus was ahead of his time in the human-identifiabilty stakes.