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Welcome to the 15th (fifteenth) writing club update. Opening Manu Saadia's Trekonomics to page 15 ("Portrait of the Author as a Young Fan"), we find this fiction related snippet:

When the movie [Star Trek: The Motion Picture] was over, I really, really did not want to leave the bridge of the Enterprise. I had to make that experience last. I still remember that very precise feeling, equal parts wonderment, recognition, and melancholy: this was the place I had been looking for, this was where I wanted to live, this was where I belonged. I had found my promised land. Pity it was all fiction and make-believe.

A pity indeed that the post-scarcity almost-utopia of Star Trek's Federation is only make-believe. But then isn't a story an almost-world, waiting to be brought forward by the midwives of action. Maybe casting writers and artists as parents is overstating our importance a little bit... it's nice to think about, though.

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[โ€“] grrgyle@slrpnk.net 6 points 3 months ago (2 children)

So last month I said I would try to bring one of my ideas into the world and share it, and here it is: Gallery of the World. It's kind of rough, and re-reading it now I can see a couple typos I'd like to fix, and it's kind of got this trademark theoretical style without characters that I'm trying to get away from, but I took my shot and there it is, haha. Critiques welcome.

I'm looking into stepping up my hours of paid work, and maybe finding some freelance for the Winter so I'm not sure how much focus I can devote to writing. But my goal for the next interval of September-October will be to (generally) keep stoking the fires of creative writing, and (specifically) work on the draft for my bio/corp/hell/hope/punk bromance short story (lol maybe I'm piling a little too much on it, but all I have right now are some rough notes and a vibe, so we'll see what survives once I start in on that draft).

[โ€“] ellie@slrpnk.net 4 points 3 months ago (1 children)

I like the piece, very thoughtful. But the ending confuses me slightly, is it meant to imply the random anonymous artists disappear or stop making art? Or just that named artists cease to be a thing, in that hypothetical setting?

[โ€“] grrgyle@slrpnk.net 5 points 3 months ago* (last edited 3 months ago)

Good feedback, thank you! I see I have an unwritten assumption without realizing it: My idea was that the random art has no artist (though obviously has named artists as influences (Rubens, Mondrian, MCU...)). The art just sort of emerges from everywhere, and then art institutions adapt to commercialize it.

It's kind of about a lot of things. Since I've been working in a gallery, I wanted to talk about the business side and how the "art world" as an institution will not protect artists. It's also mocking the dream (well, one dream) of generated art, that it absorbs all this art from the world, then spits it back out without the artist.

Art without an artist would be very convenient to a business, since artists are often troubled, or "queer" in some way (to use the term broadly, but also like, actually queer).

[โ€“] Clockwork@slrpnk.net 2 points 3 months ago* (last edited 3 months ago)

Congratulations! I'll try to read it as soon as I have some time and get back to you with feedback, if you don't mind.

bio/corp/hell/hope/punk

I think only two of these will survive by the end of it ๐Ÿ˜‚