I know what you mean yet I do enjoy the design of this poster, it is like something I would see in a Wild West Gazette. But in this day and age I agree this poster is not effective in conveying the political message. Maybe reduce word count, I think text size and sideways words are okay when used modestly.

[–] Linktank@lemmy.today 1 points 1 week ago

It's not a live laugh love poster. This is serious shit. There's a time and place, and this aint it.

[–] fubo@lemmy.world 4 points 1 week ago

Also, "amendment" is spelled like that.

[–] technomad@slrpnk.net 3 points 1 week ago (1 children)

I agree with the others that it's a bit too dense. Shortening it up and making it a bit more succinct would help.

Also, one small note (just add the word 'put'):

...kidnapped imprisoned & -put- in centers of detention...

[–] Cort@lemmy.world 1 points 1 week ago (1 children)

It's a stylistic choice, but I think the & should be read as being between kidnapped & imprisoned

[–] technomad@slrpnk.net 1 points 1 week ago

Good point. I didn't really think of it like that (or see it that way visually), but that would make sense.